Really enjoying the game so far. What is the song that plays when the mc and Abi are talking on the balcony? Actually, do you have a list of all of the songs you used?
Eternum-y vibe, but in a good way. Very well-written AVN with enough content to build suspense in the story. I can't wait for episode 3 and more upcoming updates!
Isn't it even better that it resembles Eternum? These people do not read manhwa? There's literally 1000 Manhwa's with level-up systems and towers in them...
I think Korea goal is to get the genre of Level Up Systems and Tower, while Japan is Isekai, which is now a genre, but there's not many studio adapting Manwha it only adapts promising manwha, and the story is easy to make and upload, that's why there's so many of them, it is just like isekai but I wonder what they will call the next genre if it happens? Maybe in korean words lol.
Interesting story, fun game so far. Really wouldn't mind an actual number or meter attached to the profiles So we can see just how good or bad we are doing, especially if the current relationship number shows what the max possible at that point in time would be, so we know how badly we've goofed.
For all the people comparing it to Eternum...
I feel like I felt when all of my friends told me when the first Matrix movie came out that they'd never seen anything like it, idea wise, and I watched it, and was like... there's not a single idea here. I haven't seen in a short story before. All of the things that they are complaining about you ripping off of Eternum... Are absolutely classic tropes of the avn/erotica game and or sci-fi genres... Eternum didn't do any of it first.
I very much enjoy this game, homage-in-part though it may be, and it has great potential. Hesitated to comment lest it be taken as negative, but promised Tanxui that I would post this here if I played through and planned to continue (I do), as he said this is something devs want to hear: the girl's eye movements sometimes remind me of my huge cat, who has a big enough snout where he gets cross-eyed in close. Some of the girls (seems more pronounced if eyes are blue or green) seem as if their eye-focus setting was placed right in front of them during illustration, or perhaps where the screen is, not back where the MC's POV is. It seems to get better over time. Again, I think the game is great, and don't want this construed as a negative.
For context: He wrote about this "slight cross-eyed impression" in another comment section and I encouraged him to post it here since I know that the dev appreciates constructive feedback.
For the record, I didn't notice anything wrong with the pupil positioning, but I'm also not very observant and he seems to know what he's talking about. As always, all devs are free to heed or ignore feedback as they see fit.
Interesting, if you have any scenes in particular in mind that'd be helpful! I can go back and check where I set the line of sight. And thank you for playing :)
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Really enjoying the game so far. What is the song that plays when the mc and Abi are talking on the balcony? Actually, do you have a list of all of the songs you used?
Eternum-y vibe, but in a good way. Very well-written AVN with enough content to build suspense in the story. I can't wait for episode 3 and more upcoming updates!
I really liked it, Waiting for next update!
Isn't it even better that it resembles Eternum? These people do not read manhwa? There's literally 1000 Manhwa's with level-up systems and towers in them...
I think Korea goal is to get the genre of Level Up Systems and Tower, while Japan is Isekai, which is now a genre, but there's not many studio adapting Manwha it only adapts promising manwha, and the story is easy to make and upload, that's why there's so many of them, it is just like isekai but I wonder what they will call the next genre if it happens? Maybe in korean words lol.
Are all the girls paths able to be kept without interfereing woth each other?
I wont lie but its like a second version of Eternum but i won't complain cuz i enjoyed it nevertheless
有没有中文版的啊，作者
Interesting story, fun game so far. Really wouldn't mind an actual number or meter attached to the profiles So we can see just how good or bad we are doing, especially if the current relationship number shows what the max possible at that point in time would be, so we know how badly we've goofed.
For all the people comparing it to Eternum...
I feel like I felt when all of my friends told me when the first Matrix movie came out that they'd never seen anything like it, idea wise, and I watched it, and was like... there's not a single idea here. I haven't seen in a short story before. All of the things that they are complaining about you ripping off of Eternum... Are absolutely classic tropes of the avn/erotica game and or sci-fi genres... Eternum didn't do any of it first.
Looking forward to more
Thanks for the feedback and support :)
I very much enjoy this game, homage-in-part though it may be, and it has great potential. Hesitated to comment lest it be taken as negative, but promised Tanxui that I would post this here if I played through and planned to continue (I do), as he said this is something devs want to hear: the girl's eye movements sometimes remind me of my huge cat, who has a big enough snout where he gets cross-eyed in close. Some of the girls (seems more pronounced if eyes are blue or green) seem as if their eye-focus setting was placed right in front of them during illustration, or perhaps where the screen is, not back where the MC's POV is. It seems to get better over time. Again, I think the game is great, and don't want this construed as a negative.
For context: He wrote about this "slight cross-eyed impression" in another comment section and I encouraged him to post it here since I know that the dev appreciates constructive feedback.
For the record, I didn't notice anything wrong with the pupil positioning, but I'm also not very observant and he seems to know what he's talking about. As always, all devs are free to heed or ignore feedback as they see fit.
Interesting, if you have any scenes in particular in mind that'd be helpful! I can go back and check where I set the line of sight. And thank you for playing :)
T is entirely accurate, though he does skip over the part about me not wanting to be That Asshole who gripes about a good thing.
As far as scene-specific, I'll do so if time permits.
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